Black Poetry : Just Want Something Whole

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just want something whole


    You only call me, As a means of wasting some time
    So Don't call me, If you've nothing on your mind
    I may not be Mr. Right but I'm certainly not Mr. Wrong
    I'm not the kind of man that you would want to string along

    It's easier on one, when you know your not planning to stay
    See I have time for games, When I know your the type that likes to play
    You see I am a good man, the kind that women adore
    I come correct always, do the same or you'll get the door

    I can play the game but only if games are what you're into.
    But I wont play your heart, that's punishment none should go through
    Don't touch me If you're planning a quick evening depart
    Don't touch me If you've got nothing for me in your heart.

    Empty touches are like shallow waters that can never baptize a soul
    What I want is so much more, something complete, permanent, something whole.

    Don't get me wrong, I'm still a brother who enjoys to play the dating field
    But for me it's like an interview process to see who'll get the job, and offer something real

    I'm the type who believes in love, romance, and marriage these are facts
    And the one who wins the spot in my heart will be offered a lifetime contract.

    Nahshon-Rae
     
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    Good come around.
    Your words are an anchor.
     
  3. Nahshon

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    Thank you so much for your for your comments...I really appreciate you Candeesweet...
     
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    This could be a romantic's athem.
     
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    I agree...
     
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    something whole and bold and beautiful

    no partial anything.

    let them know what you're looking for, my brutha.
    NO GAME PLAYERS ALLOWED.

    nice words.
     
  8. Nahshon

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    Thank you Butterfly#1, I Am Becoming Me, & Baller for all your kind words and thoughts...
     
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    Beautiful write, Brother Poet Nahshon. Clear and concise. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing, this sparkling beauty.

    (smile)
     
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    Thank you for your kind words TotalView...I just try to keep it real from the heart, soul and mind...
     
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