Black Poetry : Just want something whole

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Jun 9, 2004.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You only call me, As a means of wasting some time
    So Don't call me, If you've nothing on your mind
    I may not be Mr. Right but I'm certainly not Mr. Wrong
    I'm not the kind of man that you would want string along

    It's easier on one, when you know your not planning to stay
    See I have time for games, When I know your the type that likes to play
    You see I am a good man, the kind that women adore
    I come correct always, do the same or you'll get the door

    I can play the game but only if games are what you're into.
    But I wont play your heart, that's punishment none should go through
    Don't touch me If you're planning a quick evening depart
    Don't touch me If you've got nothing for me in your heart.

    Empty touches are like are like shallow waters that can never baptize a soul
    What I need is so much more, something complete, permanent, something whole.

    Don't get me wrong, I'm still a brother who enjoys to play the dating field
    But for me it's like an interview process to see who'll get the job, and offer something real

    I'm the type who believes in love, romance, and marriage these are facts
    And the one who wins the spot in my heart will be offered a lifetime contract.

    Nahshon-Rae
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i did this to you wow....nice
    but ummm i likes yours just the same...
    so its a honor that i can inspire another poet...wow
    imma have to watch you more.....
    likes this flow feeling it
    thanks......
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another page of a real man book
    tyte to the point flow
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very refreshing to the soul, to the heart and to the lucky lady that holds the "Winning" ticket. I like this piece. And I'm happy you shared.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You write of something whole and real, dealing in the direct truth. Many can appreciate that. Flow on.
     
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    thank you all for your kind and generous words...
    you all make a poet feel loved.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a tight flow. In reading it, the sincerity comes thru.

    No time for games, unless on the field. Time is short and she should come real. Love taps, accepted. Romantic nights granted. There has to be some give and take, some play and smiles to make the earth shake.

    It is easier on one, when they know where they stand up front. keep it real.
     
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