Black Poetry : just vibe with me.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by manifested, Mar 17, 2002.

  1. manifested

    manifested Active Member MEMBER

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    (juss vibe y'all)


    well.
    never thought it would come down to--
    me seeing you laying there
    motionless...
    thought you'd live forever--
    u
    were
    an ICON in my dilated puplis--
    bright-shining omniscence
    in my young mind--
    i thought you were invincible--
    infallible--
    and felt no pain...
    but
    you felt pain
    and you weren't invincible--
    and you cried tears too
    and sometimes felt rainy days
    and fell short of an icon--

    but u are my icon--
    and you are invincible--
    and you are alive--
    as a matter of fact
    i see you seeing me--
    seeing
    soon...in perfect form--
    where tears and rainy days--
    cease to exist

    i love you
    and you took part of me with you.
    you took most of me with you.
    when i thought i hadn't a reason to live--
    now i know i do.
    i should fulfill my purpose--
    whatever it might be and--
    see u once again--
    i promise i'll see you there with grandma
    and grandad--
    the grandad i never knew--
    we'll sit and talk lifetimes over--
    and laugh like
    we are the funniest people we've ever heard--

    now whenever i think of you--
    i see that icon...
    that shining sun of a man that
    dilated my young pupils and
    fertilized my young mind--

    i love you.
    i'll miss you.
    because you were you.
    and never anyone else.

    i'm with you.
    and you are still alive--
    because all of you is with me.

    manifested.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within self thou live through u ...........nice poet!
     
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    sitting on the banks of the river LIFE
    watching past and future flutter by
    as much as we want to ask WHY
    in the end, all we do is say GOOD BY.

    GOOD BY.

    {THANKS for manifesting your soul onto the pages of our hearts.}
     
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    Yessssss ... thank you for manifesting my soul through your poetry

    This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. manifested

    manifested Active Member MEMBER

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    i wanna thank u all

    for the replies and support


    manifested.
     
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