Black Poetry : Just Venting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Dec 23, 2004.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Coming up thru this school system
    I could sense something was wrong around the 13th age
    so I went on my own journey for truth
    when I left the 13th grade
    I grew up christian so I saw where God told abraham that his people
    would be strangers in a strange land, check the middle of the 13th page
    before he left Mecca
    Siddharta Guatama Buddha was the 13th sage
    In the 2000 election how come the winner wasn't decided
    until the 13th hour on the 13th day
    and to rub it in our faces
    they put out a movie called 13 days
    In 1963 President Kennedy was killed near a MASONIC temple
    when he was shot by his DRIVER after his 13th wave
    "their" Princess Diana died in the "Tunnel of the Moon goddess"
    at the 13th pillar, then placed in her families 13th grave
    on the back of your dollar bill there are 13 steps in the incomplete pyramid
    13 stars above the eagles head
    13 arrows and 13 leaves in the eagle claws
    he almost looks alive, although the eagles dead
    13 letters in "E pluribus unum"
    13 letters in "annuit coeptis"
    how many more 13's must be metioned
    before we see that the masons since 1776 have had this system corrupted
    13 tail feathers on the Eagle & 13 stripes in the flag on his chest
    you see they can't confine it
    Betsy Ross may have sewn the flag
    but I know she did't design it
    The IRS, The Federal Reserve banks and FBI
    were all born in the same year
    that's right, you guessed it
    1913, I wonder what they're trying to say here
    the pentagon was hit by a missle, not a plane
    they never found the wings, how did they get away here
    the plane in pennsylvania was shot down
    why do they keep tryin' to play here
    and all the phone calls were phony
    somebody do the math wit' me
    "they took over the planes with boxcutters".......yeah right
    I looked around, but couldn't find nobody laugh wit' me
    everyone was placed in instant shock
    everybody caught up in the drama
    not realizing this was set up way in advance
    but we were hypnotized by the medias mind control trauma
    it wasn't Saddham Hussein
    or his half Cousin Osama
    only the truth can set us free
    not the psychic network or the dalai lamma
    just know that freedom isn't free
    we have to be willing to pay a price for it
    El hajj Malik and Martin knew
    so they were willing to pay their lives for it
    The fake self-appointed unholy aplostle Paul de-valued Jesus' teachings
    guess he didn't want to pay like the Christ for it
    they say he's coming back again
    so for sin, I guess he's willing to pay twice for it
    "the light was shown in the darkness
    but the darkness couldn't comprehend it"
    I had bible study at a preachers house and I asked him some biblical ?'s
    he left his own house cause he didn't have the answers and got offended
    he came back a half hour later
    and he read a passage from Isaih
    saying the disbeliever will be cast into hell for not believing god's word
    I looked at him wih a smile and said "Satan, then I guess I'll see you later"
    we have to challenge what these liars
    are spewing from the pulpit
    Like Jesus dying on friday and being raised 3 days later
    but 3 days later is Monday, so who are they fooling with this BULL s____t
    and if sin is still in the world
    then why call the day of his death "Good Friday"
    celebrated on different days and sometimes months
    it's all a bunch of lies it what I say
    take it or leave it alone
    we're dealing with wicked deceivers
    jumping up and down catching unholy ghost
    means we got some wicked believers
    cause if the true holy ghost is caught
    ain't no gettin' up from that
    but I pray that whitney soon catch it
    so she can give up bobby and the crack
    "he ain't bring her this far too leave her"
    don't you know that song
    show some love and put down the guns
    don't we know that's wrong
    no need to quote the "declaration or Constitution"
    don't we know that's gone
    it was stolen by the thief who stole the office
    while his hand was on the "good book"
    but I guess it's part of his Dioribo-Nucleic-Acid
    now his father, that was a good crook!
     
  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    dropped like its hot...... poet....im clapping......a real poet has spoken....reading this was like ...like ...me.....lol....flow on ...hookup :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
     
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    this was an outstanding prose....
    one more 13
    13 people at da last supper....including Jesus...
    keep scribing poet
    one love
    khasm
     
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    deep tyte awesome flow on 13 reasons
    vent on i'm listening
     
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    Giving us something to think about while expounding on the number thirteen, keep those flows coming.
     
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    lol @ hookup smh lol

    word info I am enjoyin ya :)

    I dont think i have said jes yet so...WELCOME HOME :)
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    okay info...you know i like your flows..(and your haiku too)
    name seems right as you speak to the ‹l3
    you know what stevie says "if you believe in things that you don't understand and you suffer...superstition ain't the way"
    nice write...keep venting...
     
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    That was awesome but I have one question?? Do you consider yourself an Atheist or are you posing questions for those self proclaimed Christians that are hypocrits?
     
  9. info-moetry

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    peace,

    It is the latter of your ? Yaya! For I don't believe there is any such thing as an Atheist, for how can one not "believe in" what they say does not exist........

    I thank all of your for your warm comments & love......

    peace
     
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    reL: Just venting

    Your flow is amazing. I read the other poem also. Very nice.
     
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