Black Poetry : Just Ventin pt 4

[info-moetry]

flow wit da percission
of a Dr performin circumcission
so many people in pain
but it ain't never really hurt ta listen
they tried to confuse our optics
but they ain't really hurt our vision
you see, we can still see
things deeper than the Sea itself
when you read the story of the prophets
I wonder how many see themselfs
or are they just stories
made up symbolism
metaphores & allegories
or is it talkin bout you
the original black nation
tha one's who gave Krisha too the Indians
Quatzacoatl to the Mexicans and Buddha too the Asians
Siddharta Guatama that is
don't get it twisted
as there was more than one Budhha
but in HIS-story books the others seem to be unlisted
this is raw and uncut
no need ta mix it with bisquick
but on da fo shizznit
we gotta get back ta our biznitt
I'm just here tryin ta viznent
can I get a witnizznet
so many planets we used ta vizznit
but today we act like we're scared too levitate
I leave you with this one question in mind
where did Mars get it's face.........................?

Info-Moetry (c) 2005

 

[$$RICH$$]

man .....this here make u think
i love how u brought it to my mental

 

[PoeticManifesta]

Dat 1st ling.. Ewwwww..
f.y.i... theres a website dedicated to "circumcisions gong bad"..lol
but i loved the flow..
it was definately an atention grabber!

 

[queentswana]

You sure got my attention King, it leaves much thought for the mental, I like the way you dropped this piece, thanks for the info

 

[Tantrum]

Whoa that was ahot piece I love how you brought this piece to us for real much love poet