Black Poetry : Just Ventin pt 4

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Nov 7, 2005.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    flow wit da percission
    of a Dr performin circumcission
    so many people in pain
    but it ain't never really hurt ta listen
    they tried to confuse our optics
    but they ain't really hurt our vision
    you see, we can still see
    things deeper than the Sea itself
    when you read the story of the prophets
    I wonder how many see themselfs
    or are they just stories
    made up symbolism
    metaphores & allegories
    or is it talkin bout you
    the original black nation
    tha one's who gave Krisha too the Indians
    Quatzacoatl to the Mexicans and Buddha too the Asians
    Siddharta Guatama that is
    don't get it twisted
    as there was more than one Budhha
    but in HIS-story books the others seem to be unlisted
    this is raw and uncut
    no need ta mix it with bisquick
    but on da fo shizznit
    we gotta get back ta our biznitt
    I'm just here tryin ta viznent
    can I get a witnizznet
    so many planets we used ta vizznit
    but today we act like we're scared too levitate
    I leave you with this one question in mind
    where did Mars get it's face.........................?

    Info-Moetry (c) 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man .....this here make u think
    i love how u brought it to my mental
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dat 1st ling.. Ewwwww..
    f.y.i... theres a website dedicated to "circumcisions gong bad"..lol
    but i loved the flow..
    it was definately an atention grabber!
     
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    You sure got my attention King, it leaves much thought for the mental, I like the way you dropped this piece, thanks for the info
     
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    Whoa that was ahot piece I love how you brought this piece to us for real much love poet
     
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    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    info you got deep on us. Very nice with the knowledge.

    Peace.
     
  7. Bluewater

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    HI info-moetry
    Wonderful Yeah
    Speak Brotha Preach
    we gotta get back ta our biznitt
    I'm just here tryin ta viznent
    can I get a witnizznet

    Our focus should be of US
    Feeling the realness

    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving your style, as usual, you challenge us to keep our minds open, and I appreciate that poet.
     
  9. info-moetry

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    peace,

    Ty for the love

    Rich
    Poetic
    Watz
    Tantrum
    Bluewater
    QueeT
    LoveNthysoul
     
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    all i can say is O.k thats what you say when your left speechless. much love for ya Nevar:hearts2:
     
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