Black Poetry : Just trying to rhyme. Lol.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ibrahim, Mar 6, 2006.

  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok...here we go

    Let me give you a kiss
    For it is you i miss
    Let our love shine
    For you are mine
    Let it lighten up the night
    And let me give it to you with all my might
    No one could ever replace you
    Others wish they were you
    But i am glad i have you
    My Beautiful black queen.
     
  2. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA!!!! Well gon on now ibrahim... you doin the darn thang:great:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was hot poet check this
    Try this version on her

    For you I miss
    Our love shines
    Finer than China
    Sippin on white wine
    For you are mine
    Stop baby breath
    Give it to you all night
    With all my might
    Who could replace you
    No one can replace you
    They just want to be you
    Im Ibrahim
    Baby you heard Im Imbrahim
    Its like im saying I-B-Him
    Low cut faded-Tilt my brim
    Baby never scuff my tims
    Im in a Maybach-Nine tucked
    All the ladies like
    That B-Him

    Much Love Brother Ibrahim
    Try it tell me if it works
    Much Love 2 You Brother
    Hope it aint too hott out there for ya
    :bully:
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww.. your so sweet.. i see now why you kept on tellin me to read this poem..
    ibrahim your going to make a very nice beau one day..
    but you still cant be mine..
    so.. while i appreciate the romantic gesture..
    im still taken..
    :rolleyes: :laugh:


     
  5. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol...isn't this girl crazy.
    Don't call me again.
    LMAO.
     
  6. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother, you are so creative.
    i like this.
    Thanks
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh isnt this cute ibriham you still my sexy beast. its nice to know that in your world women are treatly nice. maybe the others ought to take lesson from you. flo on baby!!!!!!!!!!!:love:
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx sister sonnee
    :kiss::love:
     
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    This is a prayer before my tears fall!
    I am a fan of yours:love: :love: :love:
    You should post more of your heart, a great soul would appreciate it!:love: :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    droppin dem love line
    to leave a shine
    coz she not mine
    so go head wine & dine

    tyte drop bruh !
     
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