Black Poetry : Just Trap !!

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s a thing..
    Of me and my heart……trap!!
    Thoughts of…
    Coming in form of dreams
    Into reality…blowing my mind
    I got these…
    Thoughts and wishes with hope
    Day and night and afternoons
    In my reality as ….

    Somebody tell me what’s going on?
    Slowly losing my mind…
    Feel my self-sinking….Quickly….
    How it happen I don’t know
    Feeling trap but I know it’s real
    See I always write on love and passion
    Releasing a flow of wishes…
    That all seek ….or feel

    But right now….
    I am trap...slowly losing
    Can’t seem to get this off my mind
    In my thoughts
    In my dreams
    And I turn around lost
    Can’t grasp control of it all
    Solid ground is moving
    Like I am flying…smh
    Sinking
    Sank
    Sunk !!!!
    My spiritual lover
    My mental invader
    My soul seducer
    Makes me laugh
    Makes me feel
    Took me out the dark
    And brought light
    I feel him pulling me
    And I can’t turn back
    It got a hold on me
    Moves me to no return
    Its like I am twisted and untied
    Lock in…..lost…smh

    And I am slowly losing my mind
    Surrendering to his softness
    His tone…his strength
    Guidance...like he knows
    My wants and needs
    And feeds my craving by
    Words he pass…knowledge
    And wisdom…fills me up
    Takes me on a trip every time
    What a mental invasion !!
    Fire blazing
    Desire rising
    I am not one to go with ease
    But he got me
    So somebody tell me
    What’s going on?
    As I tried to resist it just took over!!!
    TRAP!! TRAP!!
    Just TRAP!!!
    And loving it.... :heart:

    (C) 2004

     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    he sounds like a playa to me. :lol: Runnnnnnnnnnnn, Forest,...runnnn. :lol:

    :thanks: for this lovely peace...feelings described well. :kiss:

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Money...if i run into him i be sure to runnnnnnn...:lol: smh
    glad ya enjoyed my scribe....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound good to me dis was nicely done sis....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich..yeah it do sound good indeed...
    thanks for the loving support :heart:
    Peace
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya right so good to bite .....lol
    i love this flow sistah u was on some wave i like
     
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    "he sounds like a playa to me. Runnnnnnnnnnnn, Forest,...runnnn....." OMG Money, that was too funny. In some ways it's good to feel trapped, in other ways, it doesn't. That's the feel I got from this piece, the ambiguity of it. Nice write.
     
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    LOL! Awesome write!

    Brother Money is a messs! LOL

    Loving it!
     
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    smh @ money lol
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmm TRAPped and LOVING it??
    two words
    SEEK HELP :lol: :lol: :laugh: juuuuusssssssssssss keeeeeeedinggggggggggggggg :lol:
     
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    Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun Forrest ...............runnnn! was hilarious! nothin wrong with feeling a little trapped in a good way. Great piece! feelin this.
     
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