Black Poetry : Just Tonight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 7, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She looks absolutely fabulous
    Fine in her silk blue dress
    Her skin soft and dark
    Skin I'd love to caress

    Just for tonight
    I could fall in love with her
    Be that special man
    Who can hold her tight
    Make love all night
    Make love right
    I wonder if she'd be down
    Just for tonight

    I'd be the perfect gentleman
    Attentive in every way
    Hold her hand as we look at the moon
    We'd dance slow and smooth
    To a romance tune

    We could make love
    Like we've known each other forever
    Would she hear me?
    Would she slap me?
    Is she the type to never say never?

    I'm down so low
    I know she could make my heart fly
    Just for tonight
    She could be my lady
    I could be her guy

    From the finest hotel
    We'll see the morning light
    If she would let me be her lover
    Just one time
    Just for tonight

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truly romantic

    would that we could settle for just once, just one time, just one night. Woooooo, BE! What you describe must needs be repeated, my brotha!


    a
     
  3. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mannnnn

    If I knew a brotha was thinkin what you talkin here...he could have me tonight, tomorrow night, and every night after that!

    Well done, BE. I agree with Alyce, you are quite the romantic. :)

    Maggie
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful BE...................

    let the ladies know ya heart is of love:toast:
     
  5. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Beat

    Your words paint the sweetest pictures.

    Thank you

    SWT
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic notes...

    BE...sing it!

    beautiful...indeed!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this piece...
    i'll just leave it at that. ;)

    -7:spinstar:
     
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