Black Poetry : just to say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Jan 7, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    i called her
    and she told me
    all your business

    i didn't want to
    do this but
    you forced me too

    for months u been
    lying watchin me cry
    and i had to find the truth

    u were still fuggin your
    baby momma , she a crack head
    and your duality caused us drama

    i loved u truly
    carried you in my heart and
    now that your busted

    you can't say sorry?

    your ducking and dodging
    with a pseudo attitude to
    hide the guilt you can't admit

    all summer long
    all during the fall
    into winters premiere

    u lied to me
    about a woman
    u claimed u don't
    want to be with

    now all i really want from you
    is just to say
    you're sorry

    but then again
    that would not be
    enough.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt poet
    the pain of a lier
    who loom to play
    in the wrong garden
    keep scribing i'm listening
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't help but feel this
    the emotion
    flows from this page
    heart felted
    indeed

    flowing
    the release
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  4. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt this all the way my mother always told me what goes around comes around and everything done in the dark come to the light. Keep up the good work
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He's not worth your feelings, cuz he's not a man.

    Men are as good as their words, & if their words are bullplop...

    Nice piece.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very emotional scribe....
    indeed a pain of a lair...
    hold ya head be strong
    like the flow posed very well
    i felt the pain within
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And one day, someone will lie his heart away..very emotional scribe.