Black Poetry : Just to....(Natural Romance)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He lusts
    and he loves
    for a touch
    from his crush
    for a puff
    of her breath
    for a moment to caress
    just to suck
    on her neck
    or to suck
    on her breasts
    just to thrust
    and finesse
    cause his strength,
    just connects..........

    but his crush,
    gave him much more
    cause he expected less
    so now his crush
    left him 'crushed'
    what a bust!
    she failed the test........

    you see,
    he's much
    of a mess
    he looks for more,
    than just sex
    much more
    than just lust
    much more
    than just breasts
    he wants
    some success
    he's struck
    in contests
    for love,
    so he suggests
    giving up -unless
    he's sure
    of the 'one' next........

    but sure ,
    he upsets
    his attempts
    become much complex
    so he subjects
    himself to his
    Black Book
    once again,
    for rough sex.........
    but deep inside,
    he still wants more than just sex.....

    but the names
    dont make sense
    Sherry,--shes full of love
    but yet
    she hates sex...
    and
    Terri--shes full of hate
    but yet
    shes great sex...
    and yes-
    shes much more
    and yes-
    hes much less
    but sure,
    this context
    must go on,
    so whuts next.....??!!!

    then he stops................

    & puts down that Black Book.......
    burns it up,~so he knows cant look.....
    he puts his ,best foot forward,
    and takes a chance....
    with the greatest way to feel love when it comes,
    Natural Romance........


    its not some type
    of contest
    for love,so he suggests
    he should give up
    unless
    hes sure of the one
    he wants next
    but sure ,he upsets
    but then he takes that chance...
    the best way that it'll happen..
    Natural Romance...

    then,
    whuts next.....? :nuts:
     
  2. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was hot! i loved it the rhyme sceme is amazing. snaps....no no applause makes more noise! good job
     
  3. Elise

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    i loved it... it had a real nice flow to it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    this was a gem of true romace to love
    not lust in the crush of sexuality & some
    i like dis joint !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And making it happen... naturally! :slobber:
     
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    Let go and let love...
    it's really quite simple
    as you taught us in the conclusion
    of your flow


    nice concept
    love the originality
    keep it flowing :toast:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELL I WROTE IT FOR YOU,SAGE.....LOL......




    :pie:<<<<<<THATS KINDA FUNNY.....
     
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    i likes this very nice indeed love the vibe
     
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    you ripped this money....
    nuff said...word!!!

    one love
    khasm
     
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    It's the age old qwestion of
    sex or romance.
    Both will happen,naturally.
    Smooth piece