Black Poetry : Just to get at you

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was passing by you
    At a bus stop when I saw you
    Baggy jeans
    Bo legged at the knees
    And the smile that would make any girl feign

    I looked in my mirror trying to size myself up
    Just to drive by you again and say what's up
    Cuz you, well you were 'what's up'
    So I checked myself in the mirror
    Making sure my game was tight when I came to ya
    Had to, if I was goin' to get at ya

    Once I made sure every hair was in place
    And my makeup was right on my face
    I turned the car back around
    Tires made a screeching sound
    A lil' girl almost got run down
    But it's whatever, if I could get at you

    I was mad as I don't know what when a school bus stopped me
    I blew my horn so the kids would run by quickly
    Shoot, cuz I had to have you with me
    Just had to bee

    SO I'm driving along when I saw the MARTA bus pull in front of me
    Oh h3ll naw, not today, you not finna get my baby
    So I sped around it just to get at you

    When I finally made it to the bus stop where you were
    I blew the horn, just so I could get at you
    You came over and you held the hand of a girl with you
    No, I know this ain't right
    I rolled down the window and asked your name boldly, nevertheless
    "Rhonda"
    OHHHHHHHH H3LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL NAWW!!!!!
    Did I just hear that right??
    so I asked again to see if I was right
    Again, it was "Rhonda"

    I didn't say anything else I just sped off
    Heard you say something else but I couldn't hear well becuz I was down the steet
    I can't believe I was fooled so easily
    And frankly,
    I can't believe I did all that **** just to get at you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!
    the things we do to get at 'em
    this was a tyte scribe sis.......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All of that effort, and for what? I didn't see that ending coming. Kept me glued. Nice to read something new from you poet.
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll. And the funny thing about this is, it was so TRUE. Can you blieve it? I thought it was a REAL dude. I was like, 'Nah-uh boo :nono: , you ain't getting in my car.' Ha ha. Thanks again ya'll for reading and commenting.
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gooddness

    That was a way nice scribe, totally had me into that one :great:
    One_Love
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks one love, thanks for showin' love to me. And feelin' it.
     
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    my sister you are so talented awesome flow you had me on this one...nice job....Amgel
     
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    **** i ain't gonna front i was glued too :jawdrop: ! **** that wus F*ed up!!! But i liked ur poem keep up the tyte scribes.
     
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    OHHH WEEEE,NICE LIL DITTY HERE...I LIKE THE STORY FO SHO

    KEEP DROPPIN LIKE ITS HOTT KRAYZE L
     
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    If you ever write a book, I want a signed copy.