Quiet Poetry Lounge : just thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Oct 19, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it be known, as i shout from the roof top
    i wont be dethrone, I WILL NOT STOP
    i got too much ridin on this, my goals i will not miss
    in my way stands my many oppositions
    so i'll just hit the switch n change my position
    my path must remain clear
    willing to destroy the enemy cuz in me lies no fear
    its funny how when you're doing good
    everyone wanna add their 2 cent
    without my consent, just a bunch of haters
    my enemy has sent............
    constantly diggin ditches for me to fall in
    but like a sayin of old, that i've always been told
    "if u dig one ditch, u betta dig 2
    the ditch u dig for me just might be for u"
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    [email protected], u really thought we couldnt make it w/o u
    someone lied 2 u, we're bigger than u
    we're gonna make it with or w/o u
    what you're failin to see is that we were
    united in hard times..
    formed at rock bottom
    nowhere to go but up, so u know we're bound to shine
    dont be coming around when people start singin our praises
    u didnt have time for us, we dont have time 4 u and ur many faces
    u tried to get us to walk at 2 different paces
    to tear us apart
    but we got heart
    we've been thru the fire so dont trip cuz ya bound to get burn
    the name we're carryin ya best believe we've earned
    thru our blood, sweat and our tears
    and trust many tears we're shedded
    but for that pain victory in our souls we're embedded
    i claim it cuz i said it
    a long journey ahead of us but we are ready
    our focus is constant and steady....................
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!
    now dis was tyte scribing here like how u broke it down
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like this...
    nice
     
  4. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well written i'm feeling this one
     
  5. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    very tight indeed! *bump* Ya'll need to check out this flow!
     
  6. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is incredible. you got some talent. i loved your flow.
     
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