Black Poetry : Just Thinking Out Loud..................

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  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    In tune with the cosmos
    we move with organized confusion
    in harmony with the Universe
    our bodies are an organized illusion
    a reflection or rather a manifestation
    of a force called thought
    to will what we will into existance
    which is a science we are subconciously taught
    brothas don't bop to be cool
    It's because the Earth's axis is slanted
    so instinctively we've adjusted to it to keep balance
    though some of us don't understand it
    so even when we see lightening
    or hear the thunder, some panic
    but it's just a message from those who sent us down
    that they see us taking our natures for granted
    even when we use umbrellas in the rain
    we're disrespecting ourselves
    the body is 3/4 water like the Earth
    so when it rains, what better way to reconnect with Ourselves
    from the cosmic, or the Buddhic
    to the Astral plane
    we can do what we will & heal ourselves
    just let your mind be the doctor to get you past your pain!!!

    Info-Moetry © 2005
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mad tyte poetic drop here info....
     
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    We can learn much for allowing ourselves to be at one with nature. Diggin your vibe as usual poet.
     
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    Nice flow..enjoyed your piece :bowdown:
     
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    I surely do agree that the "mind" ...is the doctor, but our doctor only...mind control is a hell of a thing.
     
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    Great message and tight flow, baby doll. :welldone:
     
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    NICE!

    <appears>

    Great Work here poet, loved the way this poem moved and flowed and pushed deeper into that realm of "pause, man, I never looked at it like that". Very Deep...Very Deep!

    <disappears>
     
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    peace,

    Thank you brotha $$RICH$$, Sistas Watzinaname, Nisa, Queen T, Gempis & Legendof_1_spirit.........

    I appreciate you all & thank you for your poetry which helps to keep me inspired!!!!!!!

    peace & love ya'll .........................
     
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    the POWER of the mind is always underutilized...

    ~Mind over Matter~
    you touched on "water"
    I would love for you to write
    a piece solely on water
    I think with your insight
    it would be a phenom piece!

    Write on my brother...
    I'm always reading
    Sage
     
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    (singin') I wanna go outsiiide....In the raaaaaiiiiin.....

    Now this really opened my mind.

    Thank U.

    Peace.
     
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