Black Poetry : Just thinking out loud pt. 2

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  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    with every answer
    there's a question that's been raised
    but some answers phathom deep
    if you're not ready, your mind can get grazed
    so on your mark, get set
    I'll wait for you to say go
    every action has an equal and opposite reaction
    so for every yes, someone always has to say no
    it's just the natural order of things
    but you maintain
    knowing you were born across the border of kings
    deep inside the sacred valley
    where the mind was born
    with no body around
    it would be a no-brainer that the mind would soon became torn
    & had to manifest itself in the physical form
    with an invisible limit attached
    so in time the physical would be gone
    from dusk ti'll dawn
    the only purpose was to elevate, then let us move on
    so let us move on
    like nature's natural evolution
    I still receive my lessons thru the breeze
    when I was 13 i burned the 10 commandments and the constitution
    that's when i found out George Washington was a mason
    & the preacher of my church was caught with a women who was prostitutin'
    My word to Mary Magdelene, the congregation played like the prosecution
    when they found his story convolutin'
    though, deep down I felt sorry for him
    well you know just a little
    cause the way everyone reacted
    could only be matched by white people’s reaction to the O.J. acquittal
    right then
    I wanted to ask so many questions about life
    then, when I heard about the wedding in can’a
    which caused me to raise a few questions about the story of Christ
    2nd chapter of John
    i caught it on my 2nd trip thru
    after laughing at Paul's vision
    yeah, that cat was a trip too
    you see when you find out you’ve been lied too
    you have to seek somethin’ else to guide you
    it will help to restore the sense of self inside you
    seek and ye shall find
    from now until infinity
    religious minds know not that they blaspheme
    every time they praise any 1 in the Trinity
    therefore, becoming their own worse enemy
    thou shall worship no other God but me
    I know it gets touchy touchy
    While we’re “wad’in in the water”
    But even sheep should know better to sit around complacent
    Just waitn’ for their slaughter
    Don’t be scared to question your leaders
    & don’t worry about this New World order
    It’s just an old world
    With a touch up
    I guess he forgot his lessons from the first degree
    Which is to keep silent and simply hush up
    Though I don’t bother with politics or brother Obama
    I just bought a T-shirt & on the back it says “Jesse, sit still and shut the F—k up”

    Brother Info © 2008
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i love the flow of this it was very intriguing and definitely has got me thinking out loud
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    making my mental mind think aloud now ...awesome write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother poet when you think out loud you always give us food for thought, food that nourishes the mind.
     
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    hahahaha....
    classic info...great poetic lesson son...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOOOOOO

    This was hott.. I like your writing style. Reminds me of mine a little bit.
    I'm seriously looking forward to checking the rest of your scribes out.

    Niiiiiiiice


    -L
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    lol

    the last line was on point

    man you said alot here with in depth

    as well


    PURE FIRE

    what up BX, i was over @allerton av by the bronx zoo pham then
    i went to southern blvd and 165th st, simpson st, and then over to hunts point

    but i stopped up on longwood first
     
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