Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just thinking of you

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  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caught up in the emotion of the moment
    i catch my breath
    when i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    trapped in the beauty of a well-turned phrase
    i turn my inner eye away in fear
    when i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    like a slave before her master
    not knowing quite how to act
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    contemplating scenarios
    where you are not what you seem when
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    is it fear i feel
    or anticipation that draws me back when
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    why the tug of war
    should i or should i not when
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    somehow i can't help but want to know
    what you're thinking
    when i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    i tell myself you can't miss
    what you never had when
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you

    i know i'm caught up in the moment
    but i like that feeling when
    i catch myself
    just thinking of you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we u think it's of him .....
    this played out so smooth
    tyteeeeeeeeeee..............
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes..
    mmm..
    these are wonderful thoughts
    quote:"just thinking of you"
    lovely
    Peace
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: $$RICH$$ glad you liked it

    and blue glad i could give you some wonderful thoughts -
    peace
     
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    yes it was very well pose'd ......most welcome
     
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    oooweee gurl this one had that Tony Toni Tone jam goin in my head "I've been thinkin bout uuuuuu" :)
    lol
    tyte scribe :)
     
  7. egyptianeyes

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    Diggin your style Blaque.... Peace.
     
  8. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti I had forgot that joint, thanks for reminding me!

    thanks egyptianeyes!
     
  9. true love

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    very beautiful flow. sometimes the worse thoughts are the best and sweetest thoughts. LOL
     
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