Black Poetry : Just thinking about you......

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never thought we wasn't going to be together,
    I was thinking our relationship was forever,
    it's funny how things changes,
    many was telling me "people go through phases"...
    I never ever looked at you as 'the one of the moment',
    but now..... reflecting back...love seems crazy, don't it?
    I didn't mean to hurt you....
    because deep down.... I knew you was true..
    I started to fall in love and that's when I got scared,
    because I placed my heart in hands like yours...it's just that
    those hands never cared....
    Now my feelings can't be denied,
    but the thing... there is so much we both haven't tried...
    I want us to try again of what we got,
    because if we don't keep the flame...it will be forgot....
    I know my mind wonders and strays,
    but I know deep down... I can change my ways...
    Yeah... my heart was trying to run away,
    but now... I want to be 'one' and stay...
    I understand if this too much for you,
    but know... you will always be 'my boo'.....
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you, cause what good relationship doesn't have it's own ups and downs? And if it is special like the one you're speaking of, it's worth fighting for.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt Poet of the week
    a good relation have it's marks
    and indeed worthy of the fight
    do ya thang !
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful. you truelly deserve a second chance.
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys so much for showing me love........
     
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    before i go on i like to say thank you..its rich thread he started so i let him place a thank you there...but thanks for showing both us love......

    i like your peom here as well
    and congrats on poet of the week....
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks mzblkangel.....
     
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    Nice flow.... emotional...and sincere (snaps)..I'd fall for it!!
     
  9. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol.... thanks.....
     
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