Black Poetry : Just the Tip

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moist and open orifice
    waiting, tensing, relaxing
    beckons and begs for entrance
    just to end the shreiking pleasure.

    Facile folicles feel the closeness
    as a hard shadow of heat passes,
    touches that glowing epicenter of flesh
    just above the petals with a slight bump.

    Sphincter tenses tightly
    while petals glow with dew
    spread apart, engorged and
    teased to fullness feeling the rim
    of hardness at the very elusive tip.

    Deep penetrations is only a breath away
    but pulls away, teasing hips to rise and quiver
    lifting, going forward hoping to capture
    the blunt fullness that teases and coerces.

    The constant mixing at the tip
    stirs embers until hard flames pulses,
    pulses, pulses no longer denying itself
    then one smooth, swift, quick entry
    fills the channel and rests at the bottom.

    Bit is all starts--with just the tip.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhhh

    what a way to start my mornin. The tip my eye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ra you are one wild brotha. It's about to get hotter than Gawga asphalt up in here today. :rolleyes:



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    workin' the words Poet...love it.

    BE
     
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    It all starts with the tip..

    Amun, this poem is powerful to me because of the myriad possibilities in meaning. It can be viewed only for its immidiate sexual appeal, but a closer look reveals that it has universal implications. Here are some: a woman who allows herself to be subjected to physical abuse from a man- it all starts with the tip(maybe a push, a slap, a head bump); the person who eventually becomes a drug addict- it starts with the tip- a toke here, and a toke there; the person who becomes a prolific liar-it all starts with the tip- a fib here and a fib there.... See what-a-mean? The implications are many. Deep.
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty of poetry

    That is the beuty of poetry. Often the real meaning are hidden or they change with each new reading as we discover words may be used in more than one way and meanings pop up like a jack-in-the-box, surprising us. Yes, there is more than one meaning here and it is intended to be that way. Thanks for replying.

    Amun-Ra

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    i won't delve into the {deeper:)} meanings...i'll stay with the obvious one...'coz i got thangs on my mind right about now. need to get home and handle mine.:)

    thanks Ra.
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this does give me a mind to reach

    over and wake up my man....:wink:

    thank you for this work of art, Ra!


    T
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nuff said

    Sometimes the obvious is just as well--the tip just stimulates the beginning--of whatever--it is for you--just the tip waiting just inside the door--Ra

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    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    Dayum!

    Dayum!


    Ty
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Tip

    Here's the tip--the tip is a teaser--makes mouths water, legs shake, lips flutter and vaginas tingle--just the tip--no more--just the tip--it tittilates, it tortures, it takes time--Amun-Ra


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