Black Poetry : Just something I wrote

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by legit-writer, Aug 21, 2003.

  1. legit-writer

    legit-writer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You may be more intelligent than I am, but I have respect
    for you.
    You may have lived longer than me,
    but I have been through more than you have been.
    You may have a mother that you can call and brag to her
    about this and
    that,
    but I am grateful that I have friends who would support me.
    You may have more money than I do right now,
    but I can earn love without.
    You may be clever than I would,
    but I can win just by being me.
    You may have been married once or twice,
    but I am glad that I am single
    and have never mad that commitment
    that I am regretting years down the road
    You may have better grammar than I do,
    but I am glad that I am not giving up
    You may be better than me period,
    But I am glad that the Lord is by my side,
    regardless who is better than me.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you for this flow here
    happy to be reading u .......
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY !
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful birthday poem :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed
    this is very beautiful
    Peace
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But I am glad that the Lord is by my side,

    and this is all that matters, felt ur flow.
     
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