Black Poetry : just smile....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 17, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tension is tight
    hard to even cut
    so i use my pen…
    ease ya soul
    mend the heart
    for the soul took on another level…
    capturer evny way
    and left to no bond…
    shatterin words not
    of kind….
    Create at a level of distress of
    A blacken hole….
    Lay down the laws of incontent
    Let love flow
    Ease the mind
    Now as I travel on my
    Flight
    I see a
    beatin down and flakin….
    world...
    killin itself....not of whole
    Though all the rain and the pain…
    Left ya head up
    Never let it down for the ones who
    Betray
    Steal
    Lie
    And
    Cheat
    The answer
    Will be laid….
    If you believe ya can achieve…oops not my line
    Just smile for me
    Come on now… SMILE
    Ya black one of the BEST creatures
    Every made….
    Picture thoughts of what I write…
    I would like to save the world
    But I had to drop down and save myself
    Taken it strive…
    So smile for me
    Just smile for me
    Black and proud
    The world is hurtin in fasten speed…
    Whisphers
    And creepin
    Tryin ta be a friend…
    See my words wont make the world change just
    Send some knowledge thought out the land…
    Now I ask ya…
    Just smile for me…
    Now I walk back in to eternal light…
    For The bliss I walk my everyday life….
    Just smile for me….
    And one day I be able to greet ya at dat gate…

    dis a blkangel thang.....:kiss: dig dat....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe sistah
    let ya pen mend
    da broken one and fill the dark hole
    this was nicely done as i read again !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you enjoyed it..
    and had to take a second look...
    my pen did its on thang
    i just follow and flown
    along...
     
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    So Sista Blkangel........Are you gifted with telepathic powers as well??? How did you know I needed to be picked up, Must be the Mother Afrika in you............One Love

    Seriously though......I needed this like a redneck needs a trailor!!!
    Thank You Sista........THANK YOU
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *smiling* This was tyte...... real tyte...... keep them coming....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afrostotle...today a flow came from somewhere different
    i needed to release....i only write.....lol dont know about the telepathic powers thang...just doin my flyt
    thank you for readin...:toast:

    Da1whoownslife...thank you for your read...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smile
    GOD made
    you into perfection
    of being you...
    what a gift....
    Just smile for me…
    Now I walk back in to eternal light…
    For The bliss I walk my everyday life….
    Just smile for me….
    And one day I be able to greet ya at dat gate
     
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    so beautiful and uplifting...yes i'm smiling! lol
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love....thnaks for the read.... glad ya smilin...lol

    See my words wont make the world change just
    Send some knowledge thought out the land…
    Now I ask ya…
    Just smile for me…
    Now I walk back in to eternal light…
    For The bliss I walk my everyday life….
    Just smile for me….
    And one day I be able to greet ya at dat gate…
     
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