Black Poetry : Just Slowin it Down...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 9, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just slowin it down.
    I've been movin much too fast
    Got to slow that pace
    Got to linger, relax
    Gotta start staring time in the face
    Just slowin it down.
    Have to find my mind
    and set it to creep
    it's on overtime
    see that edit, peep
    at those wheels slowin
    down, cause it's a mad
    rush, got to bring a bang
    to a simmer, it's sad
    but I must have some ease,
    if you please
    and just chill,
    cause it's just too hectic
    know that I will
    just flow on into
    this flow.....
    Just slowin it down....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we all have to
    slow down to a pace and
    take a long look
    tyte scribe
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes we do, Rich, yes we do...thanks for diggin it.
     
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    indeed sistah it's like a look in the mirror
     
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    word em up, girl, I am really feelin this one
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad ya feelin this, gempis, sometimes the world is revolving too fast.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "above all, know thyself" or something like dat. sometimes it is good to jump off and walk-not run.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're feeling this shaz, sometimes you do have to slow it down and walk, not run, thanks.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS TIGHT!

    Feeling you on this, nice symmetry , nice flow, just dam nice!
    Liking you in every speed!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Yes, slowin' down is a very good idea...

    If U live life in fast forward, U may miss the good parts & U can't rewind.

    Very nice piece.
     
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