Black Poetry : just saying

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Aug 21, 2014.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    James,

    please keep your gaze locked onto mine
    precious, as we continue our dance
    i didn't realize how much in love
    with you i was
    until the other night
    when i closed my eyes to sleep
    and i felt your tears wash over me
    i immediately awoke
    soaked in a deep longing for your love
    it was then i promised myself
    that i would give into what i'm truly feeling
    and would cover you in my love
    all my pieces landing where they may
    no need to fight for me
    i give you my life and love willingly
    until...this life is through
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like the love in the words of this poem thanks!
     
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