Black Poetry : JUST READ THIS!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't read my junk,
    just bcuz it's on the list.
    read it and feel,
    cuz you like it.
    and even if you don't,
    don't stop half way thru.
    cuz you know good and well,
    you wouldn't want it done to you.
    see everybody here,
    just doing the best they can.
    writing not for fame or recogniciation,
    just for folks to understand.
    and whether or not folks do,
    ain't to be said.
    live by this words,
    that you have read.
    and never stop flowing bcuz,
    if you do--no telling who else might.
    and for the end of poetry to come,
    is cutting off the day to only see the night.
    do you get what i'm saying,
    or did you stop reading at the top.
    don't say this is just another life poem,
    from the school of hard knocks.
    bcuz you don't know a thing,
    about what i'm writing or what i'm saying.
    most of ya'll probably won't reply,
    and ya'll know i'm right--so stop playing.
    so go ahead and say whatever,
    just view this piece and pass on by.
    but when no one replies to yo stuff,
    then you'll know why.
    bcuz the only kind of love you get,
    is the love you give when you take a stand.
    and the only way you'll understand me or others,
    is by turning your can not do's--------into cans.............. :geek:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well
    i read your flow from top
    to bottom
    Hearing you clearly
    the volume is up
    i like what you are saying
    i am embracing you :grouphug:
    let it flow more:sand: feeling you on this
    nice read
    Peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just like times before
    i read u when u enter da door
    ya flow is felt well heard
    these are the wordz
    so flow on do yo thing
    coz love up in here surely
    will ring ......feel u
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on dis...
    much love fo dis.... :angel1:
    shownin a little love go along way
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice

    I just read your flow. I want you to know I'm feeling it. Lots of time I enjoy the read. No comment on every post. Can't respond in every case. Doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the race that it left in my mind.

    " bcuz you don't know a thing,
    about what i'm writing or what i'm saying.
    most of ya'll probably won't reply,
    and ya'll know i'm right--so stop playing."


    Maybe we can add a check that notes that this is one to read. If a comment isn't in the speed of my day. I apologize.

    Maybe we can create a bank, for those that make me think. I want to read it again. Not feeling a flow today, but tomorrow I may. I don't want to miss out on your poetic shout. Thats what my bank is about. Let it flow.

    If we made it that you must comment on three to five before you can post it live. Would that be censorship? We all try to live by the rules.. sometimes I'm known for breaking the rules.. but that don't make me wrong. My days of ups and downs. time I have to hang around controls my limit. I apologize.

    Don't misunderstand.. I'm only a man. I appreciate your read.. and what you write. Keep it coming and I know one night. I will be there. Posting only for you. I enjoy everyone here. Thanks for reading mine. I will do better in time. Reading and commenting on what you flow. What you show. Is the truth.

    All post heads off the page to end on page continue... Keep it flowing poet.
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: good message...
     
  7. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i read the whole thing. I'm proud you posted this one. This was well written and I hope everyone gets it. :glasses:
     
  8. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preciate all ya'll replies and HODEE i ain't mean it like that and i know what you saying and i truly preciate you writing back and keep your poems flowing because when you flowing there's no stopping only rising above others that are always high capping or trying to stop---and Royal_T long time no see. hope to read some of your work. holla at me when you flow.........
     
  9. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    READ IT more importantly enjoyed it, blowing off steam is good for the soul.
     
  10. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nuttin but love

    Blessed Greetings.......I dig it...I don't dig it if I can't feel it.....this one here will resinate through out my day.

    Here at campus...I share, or should I say I am hassled to share on pretty much a daily basis...and if its one thing that WE poets hate...its wasting energies on folk who don't even try to speak our language

    ,,,,,Our word play here maybe different, but ultimately we all share a metaphysical and spiritual connection.....I for One felt this one....Keep it flowin..One Love
     
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