Black Poetry : ...just ramblin and releasing yall...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. MzBlkAngel

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    for ramblin...it was well posed
    i enjoyed the read..
    and feelin this...
    ramble on my sister:angel1:
     
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    whoa girl, your ramblins are gold dust. :bowdown: I love the way your mind works. :) flow on, sistah.
     
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    dis is the best ramblin ive heard! :bowdown:
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    my sister
    this was like a psalm
    as i helded my head up
    asborbing this tight
    scribe sis
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ramblin so sweet
    u are a master piece within it self
    love this here ......wow ! sistah
     
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    ramblin???? Nevrthat your thoughts seemto be a place of order then Loved the shot.
     
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    And when you search
    …for stability
    it will inevitably
    reach back for thee
    presented in the palms
    of an omnipresent divinity
    seeing your struggle
    hearing your call
    resist the waves that
    crash against your walls
    devised fabrication & abomination
    will always fall…
    caught up on psychological
    clouds of masturbatory hedonism
    yet while in their states of euphuism
    hands & feet are bound in nations
    But…
    Look to the hills…
    Sister of authenticity
    Look to the same hills…
    That confirms that you are
    Always free
    Free in mind…as well as spirit
    Free in a world of unfortunate…
    Yet no matter the tide
    No matter it’s nature
    The beacon in your persona
    Will always reign & awaken
    So look to the hills
    Feel beneath your feet
    The foundation on which you stand
    Is of…an intrinsic strength
    You see my sister
    Your are a lighthouse of wisdom
    Your stability is internal…
    Engrained in the real..
    Of your souls vision…

    You are stability…

    much love you my sister...we all need
    to vent sometimes...but most of us don't vent so
    exceptionally and artistically well...
    this was phenomenal!
     
  9. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yeah, been wating for some of this. You go head wit your bad self. LOVE IT!
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    stability
    nowdays is something
    hardly free
    with all da misconceptions
    and people headed in da
    wrong direction
    it's easy to see
    the right path
    totaly differently
    follow the leader
    and end up with a wife beater
    or a 24/7 cheater
    sometimes i feel like
    i have no more change for the meter
    just for bags of cheeba
    stability is not granted easily
    and no one can grant it to thee
    but they can definately take it from thee
    stability starts with strong knees
    cause no one can take away what you see
    internally
    triniti
    in you i already see
    someone with stability
    and a soul thats free
    as the white larks
    flying in the dark
    or the butterflies
    drifting on the gentle breeze
    in the park
    cause from positive vibes
    you get a positive spark...word

    you know you threw down right?
    got me wanting to ramble like this...:lol:
    peace
    khasm
     
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