Black Poetry : Just Puddy in my hand

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Every drop of my love
    fills a hollow place
    in ya heart of feelings

    every whisper heard
    u melt like butta
    in the handz of da lova

    every motion expressed
    is like da kiss of affection
    u like puddy in my handz
    and i love u more :spinstar:

    every time we meet
    mentally in vision
    our eyes glaze into
    the orbit cross the
    great galaxy of reason
    and compassion rides
    the thoughts i feel u
    melting like puddy

    in my arms u are caressed
    the comfort u feel is my
    love washing ya soul
    the sparkle u sho is destiny
    of desires as a flame burns
    the yearning is the fire i pose
    unto yo womanly heart
    this vision of rapture is ours
    to be saviour in
    u like puddy in my handz
    and i love u more :heart:

    when we kiss :kiss:
    it's like a :grouphug: from heaven
    and u melt like puddy
    my warmth touch u
    a tingle pass and love in
    ya eyes :luv: and when in grasp
    we :flirt: it make my head :spinn:
    baby ur finger :lips: licking good
    jump makes me :jumping: for joy
    when u melt like puddy in my handz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....reading this i was
    just a blushing
    this is so sweet
    and a well posed
    from a mental
    bliss thought
    within ones heart
    like puddy in ur handz :blush:
    i likes this :blush:

    :angel1:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really?? :blush: well ummm if i remember correctly i do believe my middle name is "puddy" :lol:
    mercy rich u make a sista blush in the DEAD of winter lol :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Catching every drip,
    every drop of your love
    makes me melt cause this
    vision was sent from above
    A love of destiny, a love
    heaven sent, makes me weak
    in your arms, holding me tight
    a vision, a love, a soul I seek.
    Like puddy I melt,
    so mold me like clay
    right into your vision
    any hour of the day.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes angel the way i do make a lady melt
    and we just take off in da visional mase
    of love blush on i see ya !!!!

    triniti.......puddy like how u melt
    in these arms it can be sweet
    lol.........gurl u something else

    watz...........indeed from every
    drop of this sweetness & vision
    it make u melt like puddy in my
    arms dis love floats like a river
    woooooweeeeeeee!!!!

    Thankz ladies blush on and enjoy
    the vision of rapture..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: away....this was
    awesome love the vibe
    laid sweet :angel1:
     
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    Man that was tight...
    brought back memories of my ex.
    :idea:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up sistah

    my brutha indeed the memories of yesterday
    can bring back so sweet days can't it !!!
    Thankz
     
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    it's a mazing how you write in dream fashion yet it's all reality tight scribe right here that's the only thing that difficult for me to write in dream fashion and remain who i am
     
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    A Celebration of tha Boundless Joys of a True & rResponsive Love...

    Tyte' Sensual Write!
     
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