Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just...Peaceful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Feb 8, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walking through the park
    your hand in mine
    no conversation
    fingers intertwine.
    Strolling through the snow
    freshly falling on my face
    I glance at the smile on yours
    no need to speed up the pace.
    Rustling through the leaves
    as we playfully stride
    caught in each other's eyes
    casting all cares aside.
    Gliding down the lane
    swept in by this bliss
    abruptly stopping, as we
    get lost in a peaceful kiss.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so lovely when da kiss
    take u to a place of love
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Rich, that's a lovely place for a kiss to bring u to. Thank you.
     
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    so true a kiss can just take u away
    to a bliss of extrme within a dream
    nice flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed the flow, thanks mzblkangel.
     
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    yes indeed what a kiss bring
    is so sweet it make u wanna ummm!!!
    sho ya right
     
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    Such lovely imagery...
    Reminded me of walking
    hand and hand with my
    Beloved in the park
    where we said
    our vows...
    In winter time
    Thank you for that


    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know this took you back to that romantic place in your life, Akilah.
     
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