Black Poetry : Just One Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticallyJust, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. PoeticallyJust

    PoeticallyJust Member MEMBER

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    Just one time
    I'd like it to be real
    When I feel it in my heart
    It's the same thing you feel
    Just one time
    I want to feel my words aren't waisted
    My love not used
    My feelings un-abused
    Just one time
    I want to be totally me
    Not what you think you need me to be
    Just one time
    I'd like to be FREE in love's fantasy
    "Just one time"
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one
    GOD BLESS :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this speaks to me smoothly wow tyte drop
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this flow....
    nice write
     
  5. Bluewater

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    i know
    for real
    this is nice
    feeling you
    on this
    Peace
     
  6. angelicsage

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    wow...
    I know exactly how this feels

    love the rhythm of this flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just one time...I hear ya...speak the truth.