Black Poetry : Just One O' Them Dayz

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Utterly despondent
    Fervently I begged and prayed
    But no respondent
    Answered my pleas
    When buckled were my knees
    Crushed by the weight of my wretchedness
    Exposed from every angle~~ shamed in my nakedness
    Battered by blustering storms
    Shattered by clustering swarms
    Of vicious, stinging, lacerating whips
    Puffy eyes and swollen lips
    From fallen tears and bitten tremblings
    Duped by deceitful dissemblings
    Stooped from burdensome sin
    And fears and doubts from within…
     
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    heavy are the burdens we bear....

    ...the layers we wear
    of gloom and doom
    where darkness and insecurity loom
    out of fear and unclear direction
    and ALL the "wrongful acts detection" reflection
    when the pillars of right seems to neglect one
    and all that's left are the seeds of destruction

    BUT ALL IS NOT LOST

    KEEP YOUR HEAD UP.

    (that's my weapon)
     
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    Awww, Baller! How sweet! THANK YOU FOR THIS! :couple:


    Will you marry me? :luvv: just kidding!

    But, this is, yet, ANOTHER keeper! I need to read this whenever I have "one of them days."
     
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    wow this is tight.
     
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    ^^^^Thank you, Bro. Conflict! All praise is much appreciated!
     
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