Black Poetry : Just one more time

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby I'm so confused.
    My mind in spinning
    Telling me stop playing the fool
    Cut my loses and move on
    But my heart breaking
    Love should never be this hard
    Please somebody stop the merry-go-round
    I can't be caught in this crazy triangle anymore
    I never co-signed for this baby mamma drama
    I know her actions can be explained away
    Hell has no fury like a woman scorned
    You and her are doing life together
    And for the sake of your son I expect no less
    I want what's best for all parties involved
    And walking away may be the solution
    Little man needs his daddy at home
    And she deserves your best effort
    Much as it hurts I think our time is up

    But before I walk off in the sunset
    I'd like just one more moment...

    I just want to be in your arms
    Just one more minute

    I want to kiss your lips
    Just one more second.

    I want to make sweet passionate love
    Just one more hour

    I want to just sit and chill with you
    Just one more evening

    I'd settle for arguing with you
    just one more moment.

    But the clock says our time is through
    So I sit here writing about you
    Just one more time

    :time: :qqb020: :time:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a heartbreaking write. Sometimes to truly love means walking away. Emotively posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    OUT-LOOK is Bright !!
    well felt yet at da end sunshine and clear eyez to a new found Love !
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i think that "one more time"

    sometimes leads to MORE pain

    i say cut your loses

    like you expressed in the earlier part of your piece

    don't make yourself more miserable

    time to move on

    especially if you are not getting the respect you deserve

    peace poet
     
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