Black Poetry : just on a cloud thinkin......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fly my valentine



    Candles burn
    As the desire raise
    Passin over the lands
    As the sweet melody
    of you keep playin
    a memory of a dream
    in reality.....
    You caused my heart to see….
    And know the uniqueness of me
    As I sing above the sky
    And pass over the lands
    A love set free
    A soul of a mate
    Exhale and breath
    Flow
    ……. Flow
    On a smooth ride
    Dance around the room
    And listen to the melody
    of your heart..
    beatin with mine
    in perfect time.....
    meeting with every sigh
    feelin every touch….
    Escapes in the galaxy
    as time is release
    Fly my valentine
    Fly my valentine….
    Streams flow and the moon sets
    Breeze blow off the starry
    of the night as I feel
    Your essence reach
    in my soul and hold It close…
    With your love as you
    taught my heart to sing..
    roll
    dip
    play
    under the cherry moon light
    and glaze across the
    clouds within the orbs of time…
    Fly my valentine
    Fly my valentine….
    my sweet sweet
    valentine
    oh my sweet
    valentine
    my heart sings…….
    Up above the sky at night
    The starz past the orbs
    And the wind so warm….
    the essence of you flow…
    within my veins and
    leads my heart in tune….
    Just……
    Fly my valentine
    My funny valentine
    Fly
    As we unwine and
    Interlace…..
    my valentine
    a blkangel thang......​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop for da sweetheart .....flow on
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply....
    just a thought of
    as i sat up
    on da clouds thinkin...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. HODEE

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    Yes Mz.. this a sweet piece for the one that has captured your heart. A very nice flow for the Valentine of your heart. :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:


    " met with every sigh
    feelin every touch…. "


    " Dance around the moon
    And listen to the melody
    of his heart..
    beatin with yours
    in perfect time..... "
     
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    This was beautiful, and you know I like the scribes with those"angel" visions.
     
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    nice flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    HODEE
    watzinaname
    Bluewater

    thanks fam for the love
    glad you
    enoyed my
    thought as i sat
    thinkin on a cloud.....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sweetest thang wit' da sweetest ring!
     
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    re: hi

    good-morning mzblkangel,


    brother decided to check out your poem, before logging off...




    would you be my valentine's? -wink- on the real sister, one could picture a couple in love, bodies moving together, as in a way it's poetry in motion... yes when one is in love, all is good, etc... sweet/romantic piece, as i have seen you grow as a poet over the past few months...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your words and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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