Black Poetry : just my thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cypher, Feb 16, 2004.

  1. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let's dance until our hearts explode inside loves desirous realms
    unlimited affection where unseen boundaries protect untamed hearts
    the climactic consumption of starved souls shines even where darkness falls
    a soulful drum line derived from the synchronized beating of our hearts
    never waning hope leads to an undeclared land of opportunity
    forgiving of all wrongs bearing the trust of spirits lost in time and space
    the vainglorious vocals rising thru the dark clouds uplifting my soul giving total control
    a midnight meeting matriculating a mood no less than monumental
    the joyous assimilation from lust to longing once thought to be impossible
    healing the wounded warriors devoted to the plight of passion
    scaling the mountainous peeks of unchartered territories where love is adorned
    explosive passion filling our lungs as if drowning in loves sweet sweat
    the warmth and tenderness delivered by one as divine as a deity
    no more deferred dreams lost in a lonely life without love
    finally two becoming one rising into the glory of love radiant as is the sun.....​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nicely done poet flow on now !!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful thoughts poet
    I enjoyed reading them

    thank you :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    wow!

    really like the imagery and the way you put this all together. nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, the pace and wording of this was so intense, just like the emotions flowing within.
     
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