Quiet Poetry Lounge : just my imagination

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 27, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    she's beeautiful like sun rays on Sundays
    while im dark like the rapists on subways

    some day, she'll come visit me on the one-way
    headin straight for "maybes" and "one days"
    Even though we touch base on some levels we can never relate

    but i dont debate what your tease may be implyin
    i would be lyin if i said i wasnt tryin
    but your warm like the spoon in the crack head's hand
    and im cold like a landlord on the crack head's land"
    and she sits back calmly without responding

    as a tear leaves her eye i decide that...
    that i was to outright and i should have been more subliminal
    but every criminal is also an individual

    so before she can speak i get up and leave
    and turn suddenly because she says "Please!
    dont leave! see what i need is to feed
    off you sticking in my mind needles

    i dont care my friends call you evil
    because i know your funny charming and romantic.
    more than any other woman gets
    and i love you more than my own life

    its cuz of you at night my wrists werent slit with my own knife
    and you say that 'you would be lyin
    if you were not tryin'
    when your not lyin it seems im cryin
    and love, love is the only thing my 'tease' was 'implying'"
    So as she weeps with depression and frustration
    i realize her true love motivation
    i reach over but feel nuthin..... cause shes just my imagination ,,,, :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:

    hookup
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this vibe...i was all up in this from top to bottom i love a good poetic story i enjoyed the read....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SOMETIME WHAT WE VISION SEEM REAL BUT DEEP INSIDE OUR HEARTS
    LOVE IS FELT TYTE DROP FROM DA IMAGINATION
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like this imaginary love latched on like an addiction. Creative drop brotha.
     
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