Black Poetry : Just Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope y'all like this. It's just something that was on my heart.

    Here I stand
    Just me
    Not a queen
    Not a servant
    Just me
    Nothing to be envied
    Nothing to be adored
    Just me
    With the long brown hair
    That won't always curl
    Just me
    And the finger nails
    Not always done
    Just me
    With the light brown eyes
    The only feature I love
    But they are also Just me
    With the mouth that
    Gets me in trouble
    Still Just me
    And the heart
    That breaks so easily
    That too, is Just me
    The heavy pressure on my heart
    The crosses I have to carry
    All belong to just me.
    So when you see me
    Don't judge me
    As being stuck up
    Or suddity
    It could be Just you.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl......., I like this

    I finally got to that point....

    it took a while.........I care to some degree...but not totally

    I'm free.....just being me.............feelin ya vibe, fa real!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just be me .......judge me not
    i love this piece
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    same here...I LOVEdED dis lol :) yes u be only YOU gurl because u sho is HOT as you are lol :)
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage... thank you I'm glad you were feeling this. Like I said it was just something on my heart
    mzblkangel... I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
    $$RICH$$... Glad you loved it and got the message i was trying to relay.
    triniti424... Girl, that's a B.I.G. compliment coming from you being that every time you spit it, my CPU catches on fire! LOL Thank you so much
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Im feeling this definitely, It is Just Me!!!! Love it, keep on flowing my sistah!
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    suddenpassion...thank you so much. i just got done reading some of your pieces and the feeling is mutual. thank you
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Nothing to be adored "

    I beg to differ.
    Your long brown hair is something to like.
    To run my fingers is sheer delite.
    Kiss your hand.
    Nails and all.

    If their done make
    them red like fire.
    I like that color.

    On your lips.
    Complement them
    with a soft tan tone.
    Your looking so fine
    my love Red Bone.

    I like the way when
    you walk, your hips.
    They move just like
    a bird so graceful side
    stepping smooth
    swaying stomping.

    Make that noise when
    you call my name.
    I adore you baby.
    Light brown eyes
    I long to stare.
    Looking into your eyes.
    I'm there.
    Red bone you told me
    was your nature rise.
    I understand you more
    than I can tell these guys.
    Speak your mind I like that
    stuff.

    You never can make
    me bored or ruff.
    It gives me a chance
    to meet my match.
    A girl like you
    OH what a catch.

    "The heavy pressure on my heart "
    "The crosses I have to carry "

    I would do all I can
    to remove the pressure.
    Tell me sweet.
    I'll meet the measure.
    I'll bear your cross like
    it was mine from the start.
    I will save your love I need your heart.
    I don't want to hurt
    I won't break your heart
    just tell and see

    I'll be the man
    You need you'll see.

    A man I know needs a goal
    and a reason to rise above
    the common season.
    I soar like a eagle.
    I can glide like a bird.
    Call me tell me.
    You just say the word.
    Tell me you need me.
    Tell come on.
    I'm packing even now.
    Hoping you'll call.
     
  10. POETIC BABI

    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    True love and Hodde , u 2 need to do a duet!! I was feelin them both