Black Poetry : JUST ME II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, May 23, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anything I do
    Isn’t forgiven or forgotten

    Anything you do
    Isn’t forgiven or forgotten

    For it will come up again.
    Some where some how
    Be recalled or mentioned.

    Again.

    If I put something together and
    I spent my precious time

    I’m involved with you, and
    Things are going just fine

    In the beginning!

    I ask will you to communicate
    I must communicate with you too.

    Now the situation changes
    Now we have some things

    To go Thru

    Can we start to work the basics?

    Like Communicate Again
    To solve the New Convolution
    That Non-Communication
    Has us In

    When I started the whole relation
    I thought about the facts

    I weighed all of the situations
    I felt we soon have met

    So it comes as no surprise to me
    That things are all f’ed up

    Because I anticipated all of this

    So let’s fix things if we must

    This time if you listen
    I have given all I have

    Don’t waste my time
    I won’t waste mine
    On none communicating jerks.


    Oh that sounds like that... Your Hateful!

    NO, Don’t Misunderstand!

    But Let Me Explain

    Let me tell what a jerk really is.
    A yank, a pull,
    A twist, a tug and a tow!

    Not a bad thing.

    HUH!

    A jerk
    Is also a wrench.

    Play with words

    They are what
    You heard

    That’s all we
    Have in life

    Just don’t waste my time
    I can waste my own!

    All for conversations worth.​






     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things done wrong tend to come back to haunt us, they always leave a shadow. But despite that, folks can mend if they both want severed ties to be fixed. That Roy Ayers and Chaka clip, The Sunshine...yes, that's what we want after all. Great complement to a wonderful write, really feeling this brother poet.
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't Non Communication of any sort.
    Pull you Down.
    Set you Back
    Yank a Chain

    Twist the Neck..
    OH ...no you didn't!

    But a tow from communication
    Going good

    Is all that's Sought

    So instead of Pulling and
    Towing each Down.

    Try a Tug up
    It's a new PULL to try.

    Respect, Consideration, and Love
    Does reach something Higher.
     
  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister :spinstar:watzinaname:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awesome piece of work brother Hodee love the flow of this piece

    Right now video clips not allowed in this area , I would normally move this
    until we come to a solution to have these or sub-forum them it's cool
    but i do ask that you not add anymore clips in the poetry get your flow on area.

    Thankz in Advance
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