Black Poetry : JUST ME II

HODEE

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Anything I do
Isn’t forgiven or forgotten

Anything you do
Isn’t forgiven or forgotten

For it will come up again.
Some where some how
Be recalled or mentioned.

Again.

If I put something together and
I spent my precious time

I’m involved with you, and
Things are going just fine

In the beginning!

I ask will you to communicate
I must communicate with you too.

Now the situation changes
Now we have some things

To go Thru

Can we start to work the basics?

Like Communicate Again
To solve the New Convolution
That Non-Communication
Has us In

When I started the whole relation
I thought about the facts

I weighed all of the situations
I felt we soon have met

So it comes as no surprise to me
That things are all f’ed up

Because I anticipated all of this

So let’s fix things if we must

This time if you listen
I have given all I have

Don’t waste my time
I won’t waste mine
On none communicating jerks.


Oh that sounds like that... Your Hateful!

NO, Don’t Misunderstand!

But Let Me Explain

Let me tell what a jerk really is.
A yank, a pull,
A twist, a tug and a tow!

Not a bad thing.

HUH!

A jerk
Is also a wrench.

Play with words

They are what
You heard

That’s all we
Have in life

Just don’t waste my time
I can waste my own!

All for conversations worth.​





 
But Let Me Explain

Let me tell what a jerk really is.
A yank, a pull,
A twist, a tug and a tow!

Don't Non Communication of any sort.
Pull you Down.
Set you Back
Yank a Chain

Twist the Neck..
OH ...no you didn't!

But a tow from communication
Going good

Is all that's Sought

So instead of Pulling and
Towing each Down.

Try a Tug up
It's a new PULL to try.

Respect, Consideration, and Love
Does reach something Higher.
 
Things done wrong tend to come back to haunt us, they always leave a shadow. But despite that, folks can mend if they both want severed ties to be fixed. That Roy Ayers and Chaka clip, The Sunshine...yes, that's what we want after all. Great complement to a wonderful write, really feeling this brother poet.

The Sunshine...yes, that's what we want after all.

Thank You Sister :spinstar:watzinaname:spinstar:
 
Awesome piece of work brother Hodee love the flow of this piece

Right now video clips not allowed in this area , I would normally move this
until we come to a solution to have these or sub-forum them it's cool
but i do ask that you not add anymore clips in the poetry get your flow on area.

Thankz in Advance
Admin.
$$RICH$$
 

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