Black Poetry : Just Married

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AACOOLDRE, Jan 18, 2005.

  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We were walking down the line
    And in just a few
    She’s gonna be mine-my pocket Dime
    Total sunlight hit after passing the last pew

    She wore white and so did I
    Only loving spirits floated upon the sky
    Under her silk dress she wore crescent underwear
    My honeymoon gift I would eventually tear

    Into a thousand pieces of meat
    Like a caveman eating an Octopus
    Appetite is stronger than a lion could eat
    Until our eyes get tired its just us

    Just married and we tap our own cans
    Our Kingdom was sealed when we locked hands
    Also when we took that Victory ride
    Now we are As one from the Groom and the bride




    Note:
    This is a fictional poem.
    I dont want people to start saying congradulations
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow and i love the creation of ya poetic mind
    this was too sweet brutha
    but let me place this in the poetry forum , this forum for (poet's of the week) ONLY !
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth drop
     
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    I like this flow really......good drop
     
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    LOL awww brotha I was about to be all like "YAY!!!" then i got to the end LOL

    :read: hehehe well nonetheless brotha it was beautiful :)

    someday perhaps :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like triniti, I was going to cheer as well, but I liked the way you put those nuptual images in our minds. Flow on.
     
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    Buttah smooth, brotha.
     
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    Makes me wanna start wife hunting.

    Nice.
     
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