Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just Listenin'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 4, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You requested that we sit down and talk
    So hear we are
    You speak about the problems we have and
    all the mistakes we've made and really
    Lover it all makes sense I see your side
    We leave the conversation and I begin to see
    You said everything without one word from me
    I saw then that my eyes had beheld
    A new sight
    Love and communication done right
    This was the first time we didn't fight
    It feels good when I can just love you
    It is the sweeter relief after all we've gone through
    And just knowing that you and I are growing is enough
    To give me a real future with faith
    I believe now that there is peace in the wait
    For true love to make its advances
    And yes I do believe in second chances
    I learned to love you and myself and the world
    I want you to know that I will always be your girl
    My new understandin' didn't come from hopin' and wishin'
    This new revalation came from JUST LISTENIN'

    The way to stay near your lover is to always hear your lover.
    :argue: cut this out so love can grow
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice! :pool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said and done to love is to understand and give that chance to be .
     
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    Wow...
    Ain't understanding "Mellow" ?
     
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    wow, i even felt the peace the peace in this flow. this was great.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep Communication will make a thang go right
    good piece
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you brown eyes and emissary. Love is a many wonderous thing when we can put ourselves aside and focus on love and all that it can offer us,if we listen.
     
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    listening brings love through love we listen intently and it will rise
    to unconditional love like never before ......................................
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And unconditional love is one of those rare finds that can't be left to chance or can it.........