Black Poetry : Just like-----????

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, May 27, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth chocolate arms,
    wrap around me.
    like the warmth,
    on a tropical deserted island.
    lips kiss me,
    and feel like---------,
    like the sweetness of a peach,
    that is filled with tangyness.
    words whispered in my ear,
    like the wind howling in the night.
    awaiting for her mistress,
    to arrive.
    strong hands,
    hold mine.
    like a death row inmate,
    clings to his last breath.
    i look at u,
    longingly.
    like a puppy waits,
    for his master to appear at the door step.
    u,
    me.
    eternity,
    forever.
    piece by piece,
    little by little.
    bit by bit,
    we fall asleep under the coconut tree in each others arms..........:x:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    lilcherry76

    Now that's what I'm talkin' about. :D

    Uhhh ruhhh...where you been all my life, baby? ;) :D

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks once again for replying,
    like i said before,
    i ain't been nowhere,
    where i wasn't wanted.....your replies are truly appreciated,
    believe that!!!!!!
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    :toast:


    This was DELICIOUS!



    And..... :birthday:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done to da max what a classic
     
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    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Yes! I feel it! Very nicely done!