Black Poetry : Just Let Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Feb 18, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How could you,
    Just touch me like you did,
    Turn my heart towards you,
    Cause my emotional breakthrough.
    I wonder if you even could tell,
    That you broke me out of my shell,
    And that I fell,
    For you.
    The most I could get now is the sound,
    Of your voice,
    Which is like music to my ears.
    Now if only you were near me,
    So that I could show you,
    How much more I want to know you,
    Grow with you, flow with you,
    As we flow with God.

    Let me see if I could explain.
    I feel somewhat like Alicia Keys,
    But at least you know my name.
    And I just want to know,
    If you could please,
    Let me be there for you.
    Let me be the one,
    That you share your inner thoughts,
    Feelings, dreams,
    The one when you ask ‘You understand?’
    Could say ‘Yea I know what you mean.’
    I feel that I could do so much.
    I’m not saying that we have to rush,
    But at least let us steadily, readily,
    Embark on that journey,
    Without looking back,
    And knowing that I gat yours and you mine.
    I know it will take time,
    But I’m willing,
    To take on the challenge of fulfilling,
    That very abyss, emptiness that you have.
    Just let me…complete my happiness…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't see him saying no
    to a Queen he know
    don't see why not
    coz ya heart hit a spot
    dis was a hot drop
    feeling dis rumble outward
    flow on express self worth
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This felt like it was from the heart, hopefully you will be heard and understood, flow on.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt
    likes the flow
    posed well
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my favorite lines
    -Let me see if I could explain.
    I feel somewhat like Alicia Keys,
    But at least you know my name-
    I likes
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is CLASSIC! I Love it.

    "I wonder if you even could tell,
    That you broke me out of my shell,
    And that I fell,
    For you.
    The most I could get now is the sound,
    Of your voice,
    Which is like music to my ears.
    Now if only you were near me,
    So that I could show you,
    How much more I want to know you,
    Grow with you, flow with you,"

    I could hardly pick a favorite part.
     
  7. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! I hope he saw this... Because it could certianly accomplish its purpose
    Beautiful
    Thanks for sharing
     
  8. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family...........I just hope he receives this as well as u did :roll: