Black Poetry : Just Let Me Love You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 8, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We can figure it out later
    Dissect the who, what, and whys
    We’ll talk about the magic
    Seen in each other’s eyes
    But now
    Right now
    Just let me love you

    For in this love
    Many things will be revealed
    I’ll love you like crazy
    Nothing will be concealed
    Just let me love you

    Let me love you
    Make you one with my soul
    Just let me love you
    Together as one
    Out of sight
    No control

    Just let me love you
    My open heart is in my hand
    Oh how I’ll love you
    We don’t need to understand

    BE
    © 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe you've summed it up very nicely.

    :heart:

    a
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    usually I come in and read your love poetry and just sit in awe at the beauty of your words...I don't reply because your words seem so personal and are meant only for that one who lights your heart...but today, I just had to say, this is...

    breathtakingly beautiful!

    K
     
  4. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful poem.
    I love it.
    *Emma*
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes, it is best to just enjoy the moment(s)....the answers are deep inside the moment(s).

    Very well said, very well done.

    Bert
     
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