Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just Give Her a Chance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tha-Emissary, Jul 9, 2005.

  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You want something from me
    Something I can’t give you
    You adore me,
    Deem me your knight in shinning armor
    When I am only your enemy
    Using my shield and shinning armor to
    Protect myself from your onslaught of emotional engagements
    I tell you the truth over the phone
    With the sharpest edge that would slice one in half
    So why does it hurt me to be on the defensive from your feelings?
    A part of me would love to drill a hole through this breastplate
    And let you drink from my pouring liquid love
    And still I have not these feelings for you, you hold for me
    I question, Why Chris?
    Is she not like any other Woman?
    Caring, Kind, Tender, and compassionate?
    Maybe it’s because I like all men have been cursed
    Resided emotions in the frame of a coke bottle for too long
    The soft neck, curving sexy name
    Giving way to a rounded chest
    Dropping lower to an even smoother base
    And still this was the very vase that played me for a Minute Maid man
    Perhaps it is time to take my thoughts and expectations of a lover
    Write them on parchment, seal them and cast the coke bottle I used to love into Poseidon’s Sea
    Because before me
    Lies a better glass that may be half full of love
    Rather than half empty
    If I just give her a chance
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    open up allow one that chance
    this was on point tyte write Emissary
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This certainly hit the target poet. If something is worth having, then it's worth taking that chance. Diggin the flow brotha.
     
  4. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful and honest...I wish more men were honest with their feelings like this. Much love to you
     
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