Black Poetry : Just Friends?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, Jul 3, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We're just two friends
    going out to dinner
    with nothing more to prove
    You're sexy and laid back
    I'm feminine and smooth

    We laugh and we giggle,
    still flirtations abound
    without a single care
    any form of contact
    causes feelings to flare

    Head to toe scan
    you tried to be slick
    you're fresh from the barber
    my perfume is sick
    You keep inchin' closer
    just to get a whiff
    I inch to get closer
    I see you get stiff

    The restaurant - dim
    in fact, its getting dimmer
    seduction's sweet surprise
    a romantic dinner
    I see right through your smile
    my brotha, you are a charmer
    you want to eat me up
    like your name is Dahmer

    Dead wrong, yes I'm sorry
    in fact it did lack taste
    I'll savor this luscious moment
    will not proceed with haste

    Your wheels begin to turn
    choirboy you are not
    treat this table like your court
    and give it your best shot
    Go'head, try your hand
    your face I won't slap
    If I get aggressive, baby
    can you handle that?

    You're looking at my eyes
    that's where your gaze is set,
    you start to lick your lips
    I know you want to jet
    Why bother with this prelim?
    The tensions in the air
    but I'll play your little game
    I love the way you stare

    The conversation's right
    you stimulate my mental
    the storm is growing now
    it's really elemental
    I feel experimental
    so do you want to teach?
    Can you break me down?
    Send tingles to my feet?

    Eyes to my thighs
    I bite my bottom lip
    the tablecloth hides your rise
    of your drink, you take a sip

    You twirl a piece of my hair
    I reach and rub your head
    the waiter wants our food order,
    I order you instead
    I'm sorry,...private thought
    did I say it out loud?
    You're such a great distraction
    I'm in a carnal cloud

    The waiter is embarrassed,
    and doesn't know what to say
    you order for both of us
    yet never look away
    He leaves once again
    and we are left alone
    You're wondering how I taste
    I wonder how you moan

    Savory anticipation
    Did you think of this?
    Innerwoman's throbbing,
    I give your neck a kiss
    Closing eyes to gather thoughts
    then you turn to ask,

    What's on your lovely mind?

    I say,

    What's for breakfast?


    jazzymoonchild, copyright @ June 2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like dinner was just the appetizer for the main course of passion. I could envision these two flirting during a candlelight meal. I enjoyed the flow.
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sista Watz! Flirting can be fun.. :roll:
     
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    See...you trying to start a forest fire up in here... :hot:

    that's why I have to keep the fire department on speed dial...lol

    This was so SUBTLY...full of eroticism :hot:

    Do you thang girl...I aint' mad atcha... :coffee:



    By the way...what did you have for breakfast or is that in part two... :read:


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  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LMAO....Sage!

    Unfortunately, this piece, the restaurant scenario, was all constructed in my head,....but........stay tuned........ :fairy:

    I am a fiery little water sign, ain't I? :grin:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Was that the "dinner" you never ate? ...did you have time to eat? :)
    that was so romantic...I really dig the way you rocked that.
     
  7. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, Queen... Thank you for that.

    Sista had a mental "TV Dinner".....LMAO

    I'm enjoying the mental flirtations right now.. :spinn:
     
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    :read: ........................ OK this right here was some sensual sensation poetic temptation mental vacation forecasting a rainy days relaxation within your dinner breakfast variation.

    Nice drop here Jazzy :read:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always, thank you Brother Python. Glad you enjoyed it :devil:
     
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    naw...see, you had me all up in the restaurant...
    could'nt look away...
    you got for real skillz sis
    that's all i can say :luv:
     
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