Black Poetry : JUST FLOWIN

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  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    They never understood me, took my soul,
    a child of silly putty they did mold,
    a brother from the hood just put on hold,
    then wonder my @ss just don't feel whole...
    When I looked into the mirror back at me,
    an African the way that I should be,
    just wasn't the reflection I did see,
    while fighting with the world just to be free....

    They put me in their schools to see the light,
    a world that they had painted to be white,
    then tell me as a black man to do right,
    not knowing deep inside I'm black as night.
    Emotions I could never really feel,
    except for all the pain I would conceal,
    and to the public I could not reveal,
    a heart that's made of gold that they might steal.

    As time would pass me by I learned to grow,
    and understood I'd reap just what I sow,
    the world was just a stage and I the show,
    free tickets out to all who want to know....
    instead of getting older I got wise,
    I kept the fire burning deep inside,
    so all you ******** kiss between my thighs,
    cause now I'm riding on a natural high....

    Your world of white supremacy is thru,
    and really there ain't much that you can do,
    just like you once ph*cked me I'm ph*ckin you,
    and verify that every word is true....
    I'm speaking for my people one and all,
    the very ones you crippled standing tall,
    the ones that you decided that should fall,
    but resurrection is our final call.
     
  2. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just Flowin:?::?::?::qqb007:

    FEELS like a Rushing WATER Runnin Thru my HEART as I GO WIT YOUR FLOW....

    The sense of Love, Connectedness and RE~storation RE~bounds
    within the Confines of my Heart... Chakra..
    which RE~cognizes the Profound[ness]
    of YOU!

    "Here's Loving YOU"..
    for all all you Give
    and DO :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    :hearts2:
     
  3. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved MWkg Keita:

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    May I have your permission to post this on the Internet groups?

    :qqb023: :qqb023: :qqb023:
     
  4. Zulile

    Zulile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keita - I enjoyed this piece - felt it from the opening line.. and can only hope I'll gain enough wisdom/connection to truly believe, act and eventually attain the spirit expressed in your final paragraphs.

    :heart:
     
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    Despite all that was done to stunt your growth, you can now touch mountain tops with ease. Powerful flow brotha.
     
  6. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I want to thank everyone for their responses. It's not like I even meant to write it...it don't even have a title!....lol I mean, I just sat down and started typing and it came out the way it did. Yes Goddess Auset, you may post it. Obviously you must be at a good site at yahoo groups. You need to give me the address so I can check it out too instead of keeping all the good stuff to yourself.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i would say this is much more than "just flowin"

    man you hit all the energy that's been pent up in the african diaspora

    peace to you bro. Keita

    definitely feeling your vision

    and can relate to it as well

    come on

    how could i not relate?

    peace
     
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    I think they know they have ran their course
    that we now take a stand..we ain't taking no more!
    yeah, they pissed in our face, and said it was RAIN
    now tell me them ******** ain't insane?

    If you have something to say brother...say it LOUD!!
    cause without a doubt...you're BLACK and you're PROUD.
    you have a brilliant mind, with a great story to avail,
    let's tell these whack ******** ...to go straight to hel-l.

    awesome piece poet, thanks for sharing.​
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm

    QQn Sista Queen

    lol

    hahaha
     
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