Black Poetry : Just Flowin(part II)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 7, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feel me, hear me, connect with me, try not to lose me
    taste me, see me, stay focused cuz i know i can be confusing

    brought 2 u by god and created by his intentions
    im aimin at my goals and shootin off deadly weapons
    ready or not, here i come, blastin thru with effect
    stop starin, but keep watchin, im risin and not stoppin til' i rest

    spittin dangerous venom and shootin flamin arrows
    watch the girl, she's different, so be careful
    breakin down walls and rebuilding new territory
    ignorin the snakes and snails that stand b4 me

    my thoughts my mind
    a word at a time
    i kick knowledge from experience- line after line

    im scared of what i know and what i think
    never, ever, will u meet a girl with such instinct
    Blokow!
     
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    That waz good poet peace and blessins keep flowin :)
     
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    keep flowin dis was on hit....
     
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    poeticlyspeakin

    This was very nice....loved it.

    You have a very nice flow....

    You should come home to voice chat...the home of poets...and read this piece for us. We'd love to hear it.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast: