Black Poetry : jUsT fLoWiN....mY fIrSt HeRe....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AfRiCaNrOoTs5o, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    just a flow......venting

    gettin stuff off my mind open blinds of the soul...
    fought rights....people gave us a fine cause we tried to be bold....
    modern times the media is censorin corruption....
    it is inevitable that i had to let out a verbal erruption....
    my conscience tells me to stop fightin by choice....
    but will a world with billions be moved by 1 voice?.....
    we're starting a revolution but are held by invisible shackles....
    go protest ? when we try they say "GET BACK FOOLS"....
    there is a flaw to everything, it is just hard to see....
    even thought we aren't blood related ya'll are apart of me.....
    when we're barred we bleed tears...but only seen it happen few times....
    when soldiers went to war and wanted to commit new crimes....
    when Jesus went on the cross to die for our sins....
    can we think of the pain today of that or savior was in ?.....

    NO !.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the flowz of love & peace
    happy u here to share in hope and unity
    this was tyte flowing look to read more of u
    welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
     
  3. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    i have been flowing for a while.....but on other sites.....I battle mostly......but topical is my best type......thanks for the feedback....
     
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    welcome to destee....
    ur are always welcome to drop your flow...
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flow feel soooo good tasting my sight...and tempting my mental

    Flow on...flow on....
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome...
    nice first drop
    l;ookin to read more
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you vented right into a flow. Welcome to Destee.
     
  8. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    iiight.....thanks for the feed brothers and sisters....uppin'
     
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