Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just Felt like Flowing.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaneak, Jun 28, 2001.

  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found peace....Let go of the things that meant a lot to me....
    I found joy....Decided to live life like a bad *** little boy....
    I found love....Realized it was more precious than people talked of....
    And then i found you....and learned what it mean to really be true.....

    I shall swim deep into an ocean of serpents to show my bravery....
    To indulge in you....to savor...Every single inch....

    And now i walk away....I ran like a fox was chasing after me...
    For my life here is done....And for me...i see no other way but to run....
    To start my world a new...and if you won't come...
    yes....without you...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea son

    this is what i'm talkin bout

    i wish i could write short strong stuff like this, man

    definitely felt the flow here so i had to hit you wit a post

    Peace from inside the struggle
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!!

    But I really couldn't tell you where it came from...Just felt like saying...I've been thinking it anyway....:)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaneak...

    continue to flow like you know poet!! :)

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and with that....

    I will continue to scribe on!!!! :)
     
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    with or without you...

    coming to that conclusion is so refreshing.
    happy for you...
    this flow was so cool!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why Thank you!!!

    I needed to say that...I needed to hear it on paper. I'm at a point in my life where i just wanna go and i don't have nothing stop me except my love for another and well he has so much holding him down...a child, education, etc. And I realized that i can't wait on a grown man to handle things that he should've taken care of a long time ago.
     
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