Quiet Poetry Lounge : Just feelings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by flo-real, Apr 19, 2005.

  1. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    Can someone please tell me how to fall out of love with a man that I can’t have?
    Or at least tell him that being in love with me…really isn’t that bad…
    See for someone who claims they don’t need me, sure gets mad if I don’t call
    Or if he can’t see me…
    what you need to see, is that I’m the one for you
    It’s obvious by how we act and the things we do…
    we talk the same slang
    And sometimes say the same thangs…so why can’t we try…to be a duo just you & I
    I won’t lie, I think about it all the time, how good the lovemaking would be if U were Mine, and how we grow old together like that good ol’1859 aged wine!
    Now, does that sound good to your ears?
    Then why are U still showing these signs of fear
    I must admit I’m scared as well, but let’s let the universe bind us & cause only time will tell…
    see you have hurt, and I have been hurt many times before…
    but until our paths crossed, I didn’t think that I could love anymore...
    hold on can someone tell me what I ‘m spilling my guts for? Then again don’t bother because it’s for someone I adore!
    But this is the same guy who says he doesn’t want a girl in his life, said he’s had a wife
    And don’t want no more pain, suffering and strife… is that right?
    That’s not what I’m here to do baby…let me tell you what I would do if I were your lady!
    It would start with motivation, that spiritual affection, and positive energy daily!
    Mid-day we’d have a session of course…you know that one where we play…with the number 4
    Oh that’s not enough? Man you tough! Well let me break it down some more
    Since you called my bluff!

    12 am we’ll be on the couch
    1 Am Harry Mary’s in ya mouth
    2 Am we move it to da bed
    3 Am 1 word “head”
    4 Am we makin passionate love
    5 Am relax it down with body rubs
    6 Am the night finally ends

    But rest up cause 12 am…we start all over again…see look at all this love your missin
    All because you don’t want a girlfriend what do we have to lose by at least tryin?
    Even your boys be like he’s lying, he got feelings, he just deny em
    That’s cool because I just wanted to express what I had to say
    And, no bad blood because I’ll continue to kick it wit you day to day!
    So love will play it’s course, just let me know when you ready to step up and call me yours… and I promise I won’t hesitate… unless love finds me elsewhere…and then it will be too late!

    Flo- Real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep hot erotic and feeling
    the passion of heart's willings
    i can't but will and what this feel
    i will but don't love is no joke !!!

    tyte drop
     
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    ok now we know why people be mia lol smh this is a hot hot piece thanks for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelings can be denied, but they are feelings all the same. Liked the way you laid this out, and added at the end that you won't be waiting forever. Enjoyed the flow.
     
  5. FloReal916

    FloReal916 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love ya''ll I so appreciate it!
     
  6. Destee

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    Sister FloReal ... Hello and Welcome ... :wave:

    Thanks for joining us and sharing your work ... it's awesome! :toast:

    You are so welcome to the love Sister ... all we ask is that you give the same to others!

    Please make yourself at home ... because you are!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. FloReal916

    FloReal916 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Destee!!

    And to all the poets, aspire to be....aspire to be no less then what your supposed to be................ and that's royalty!

    Much love Flo
     
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