Black Poetry : Just Feeling My Way

Skybeauty

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Hey Everyone,
I'm New to this site....It seems pretty interesting and appears to be very cool ...I love the spoken word....I'm just having problems as to where to post my poems ..... so I'm going to put my piece here hope you can relate and enjoy.....

ALONE
Its this situation in my heart and mind
I'm in love
or could it be lust
thats dificult enough
I'm on a journey and its getting kinda ruff
is it that I don't want to be alone do I hate myself that much
that I would fall in love with someone who doesn't give a ****
I need to reach inside and find my heart
so I can wash away the pain
It needs to strom outside so I can go take a long walk in the rain...
so I can drown in my tears
once my soul cries out it sorrows
i will have the strenght to face my fears....
being
ALONE​

Thank you and your comments are appreciated.....Much Luv "Sky"
 
SKY I HAVE DEFINTALY BEEN HERE AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR EMOTIONS HERE.
ALONE IS NOT SO BAD WHEN YOU LOOK AT YOUR ALTERNATIVE
VERY WISE TO ASK THE QUESTIONS YOU HAVE.
MANY PEOPLE OFTEN MISTAKE LUST FOR LOVE GETTING CAUGHT UP IN A GOOD FEELING, WHEN THEY DO TREAT US LIKE **** YOU KNOW.

P.S YOU POSTED THIS ONE IN A GOOD PLACE LOVED IT!

SWEETTEE, LOVE
 
Skybeauty said:
Hey Everyone,
I'm New to this site....It seems pretty interesting and appears to be very cool ...I love the spoken word....I'm just having problems as to where to post my poems ..... so I'm going to put my piece here hope you can relate and enjoy.....

ALONE
Its this situation in my heart and mind
I'm in love
or could it be lust
thats dificult enough
I'm on a journey and its getting kinda ruff
is it that I don't want to be alone do I hate myself that much
that I would fall in love with someone who doesn't give a ****
I need to reach inside and find my heart
so I can wash away the pain
It needs to strom outside so I can go take a long walk in the rain...
so I can drown in my tears
once my soul cries out it sorrows
i will have the strenght to face my fears....
being
ALONE​

Thank you and your comments are appreciated.....Much Luv "Sky"


Hi Sky
Welcome to "Sky's corner of the world" ...please relax, enjoy and make yourself at home...because you are:spin:
Allow me to share this with you...
Being alone is not the worst, but indeed the best move you can make at this point. Stay alone until you feel real good being with YOU...
If YOU don't like being with you, why should others?
YOU are a Queen...treat yourself as such, let You know that you're Beautiful...because you are. Find inner peace first.
You came in the door with a nice piece poet..I like ya style.
 
welcome to destee.com poetic playground
welcome to the house of peace & respect
welcome to the poetic maze of warmth
surely u place'd it correctly here happy to feel ya pen
enjoy / relax and flow as love is given do share it ..
 
Welcome Sky:
Your scribe is heart felt.
Let me share something with you.
There is nothing wrong with being alone.
Dont sell yourself short and settle for
anything less that what a beautiful
queen deserves just to say you have
somebody. A lot of times that somebody
turns out to be a Nobody, and you
will feel and be alone anyway.
Take your time and figure out YOU.
Then you wont have to question
what your feeling because you
will know.

Very nice write.
 

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