Black Poetry : Just Feeling My Way

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Skybeauty, Oct 10, 2006.

  1. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    Hey Everyone,
    I'm New to this site....It seems pretty interesting and appears to be very cool ...I love the spoken word....I'm just having problems as to where to post my poems ..... so I'm going to put my piece here hope you can relate and enjoy.....

    ALONE
    Its this situation in my heart and mind
    I'm in love
    or could it be lust
    thats dificult enough
    I'm on a journey and its getting kinda ruff
    is it that I don't want to be alone do I hate myself that much
    that I would fall in love with someone who doesn't give a ****
    I need to reach inside and find my heart
    so I can wash away the pain
    It needs to strom outside so I can go take a long walk in the rain...
    so I can drown in my tears
    once my soul cries out it sorrows
    i will have the strenght to face my fears....
    being
    ALONE​

    Thank you and your comments are appreciated.....Much Luv "Sky"
     
  2. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SKY I HAVE DEFINTALY BEEN HERE AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR EMOTIONS HERE.
    ALONE IS NOT SO BAD WHEN YOU LOOK AT YOUR ALTERNATIVE
    VERY WISE TO ASK THE QUESTIONS YOU HAVE.
    MANY PEOPLE OFTEN MISTAKE LUST FOR LOVE GETTING CAUGHT UP IN A GOOD FEELING, WHEN THEY DO TREAT US LIKE **** YOU KNOW.

    P.S YOU POSTED THIS ONE IN A GOOD PLACE LOVED IT!

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sky
    Welcome to "Sky's corner of the world" ...please relax, enjoy and make yourself at home...because you are:spin:
    Allow me to share this with you...
    Being alone is not the worst, but indeed the best move you can make at this point. Stay alone until you feel real good being with YOU...
    If YOU don't like being with you, why should others?
    YOU are a Queen...treat yourself as such, let You know that you're Beautiful...because you are. Find inner peace first.
    You came in the door with a nice piece poet..I like ya style.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome to the poetic maze of warmth
    surely u place'd it correctly here happy to feel ya pen
    enjoy / relax and flow as love is given do share it ..
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Sky:
    Your scribe is heart felt.
    Let me share something with you.
    There is nothing wrong with being alone.
    Dont sell yourself short and settle for
    anything less that what a beautiful
    queen deserves just to say you have
    somebody. A lot of times that somebody
    turns out to be a Nobody, and you
    will feel and be alone anyway.
    Take your time and figure out YOU.
    Then you wont have to question
    what your feeling because you
    will know.

    Very nice write.
     
  6. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes. I like.

    Glad to see you here on Destee! Welcome family :)

    That write was neat, feeling you on the wish to not be alone =\

    Speak your mind here, and we'll listen anytime.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  7. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee,sky!!!
    That was so good.
    I loved it.
    :welldone: poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep feelin as we feel u ...flow on
    again welcome to the family
     
  9. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    Many Thanks 2 everyone....This site has really inspired me to share.....And I appreicate all the LOVE shown to me......Much Luv "Sky":blowkiss:
     
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