Black Poetry : Just Exhaled.......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart spinnin…
    Mind racin…
    Flames ignite…
    And cant turn left
    Fo right…
    His love is great…
    Hold on tight…
    But then…
    At times I know
    I disappoint
    Worry
    And stress…
    If I am good enough…
    Love have called…
    Will it stay with me…
    Or fly away in time…
    As it have in da past….
    Scared
    But cant run…
    Love is keeping
    me here…
    My eyez glitter with
    the thought
    Heart beats faster…
    Scared as all…
    But I want it
    I need it…
    I enjoy it…
    I love it….
    Speedin so fast…
    Don’t want to slow down….
    My love is true…
    Hope he knows…
    what he do to me..
    Hands sweatin…
    Figgity..nervous…
    Barely can breath…
    Spinnin in circles…
    Wish and hopin…
    Taken my dream…
    To da extreme….
    Fightin for what I want…
    The more I think
    The more I want….
    Shadows follows..but
    I don’t fear…..
    I want dat rose he pose…
    House with da fence….
    2 car garage…
    unfold me
    come define me…
    I am your love…
    never to leave…
    Willing to share…
    Makin our way…
    Though the clouds…
    Up in da skies….
    No strom…
    just peace and queit…
    Dinner at 6pm…
    sittin with da family…
    Movie night…
    even dat baseball thing..
    Dancing out all night…
    Bubble baths for two…
    Step in da shower together…
    Candle lit nights
    Walks on the beach…
    Home alone quiet nights
    for two….
    Fuss and fight..
    Makeup after wards…
    communcation....
    Makin everything alright…..
    Captivity bliss
    Rapture of love…
    A vision ta bond…
    Opening of a beginning…
    Can he hear…burn candle burn…
    Don’t yea try ta go out…
    I vow I would not place it out…..
    Head spinnin…
    Mind race…
    Heart beatin fast…
    Emotions raisen…
    Captivity bond….
    Visions run..as da sun
    shines bright….
    Nights so clear
    See the starz glitter….
    Hope he knows…what he do to me..
    Hands sweatin…
    Figgity..nervous…
    Barely can breath…
    Spinnin in circles…
    Wish and hopin…
    Taken my dream…
    To da extreme….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
    he do dat to u wow!!!!
    now dat's love indeed wish i can get somebody in dis mold
    woooooooweeeeeeeee! slow down gurl
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spinnin in circles…
    Wish and hopin…
    Taken my dream…
    To da extreme….
    not goin fast just layin
    what i feel...
    and you need ta stop it....
    you got someone some where feelin ya...
    write them a poem heck
    works for me....lol
    thanks fo da read my sweet brother...
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE.........VERY VERY NICE MAMITA.....
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK and LovelyGoldenOne...thanks for the read glad you like it
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAAAAAAAAANG!!!!!

    This is sooooo very tight, my friend. Like buttah! What a flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed so it be done ....
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis..thanks girl..glad you like it...

    $$RICH$$....coooooooool
     
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    wow...the emotional roller coaster of love
    will make you need to "exhale"...but don't
    worry when it's true...it's felt...def'

    this was really nice!