Black Poetry : Just Exhale

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its been a long time since you've felt that physical touch
    since you've glided on cloud nine n had that spiritual rush
    its been awhile since you've been knocked off your feet
    since you've laid back n had the world at ur feet
    And even longer since your eyes have been stared into
    Since you've had someone who can completely commit to you

    Just breath... baby just close your eyes... just exhale...

    its been awhile since you've felt like a child
    since you've done something crazy and wild
    its been a long time since you've been kissed the right way it feels so wrong
    Its been awhile since you've felt sexy, secure, and strong
    and even longer since you've been carried to paradise
    Since you bragged to your friends and compared all the guys

    Just breathe... close your eyes... go ahead, just exhale...

    its been awhile since you've reach the highest temperature that your body can take
    since your back has been broke, your mind is totally gone, and your legs continually shake
    its been so long since you've been licked in your kitty kat
    since you've been rubbed right on that spot that makes u hot and cringe your back
    Even longer since someone has used their tongue to play with your navel
    Since you've been teased, but pleased, theres nothin like bein playfull

    just breathe... close ur eyes... and just exhale...

    the time is now.... just exhale....

    I wanna bring those times back... just exhale....
     
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    ya'll are bringin the heat fo' real.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    ok ok!!!! we got a hot a@! poem on the loose. tight poem, it went straight to my head........just exhale.....much love :)
     
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    lol thank u.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    exhaling exhaling !!!
    tyte hot flow !!
     
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    thanx $$Rich$$
     
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    This was so tight :) Look for my response (I promise you that It can't TOUCH what you've just written cuz this sh8t was so tight)
     
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    thank u but im sure urs is just as good.
     
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    Yo, I got to agree with everybody else......this is a tight piece.....
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u shango.
     
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